There are good and bad things about how drug addiction increase a lot during the years. There are lots of causes and effects about it. So, one cause which is a little bit important is the bad influence of friends. The effects can be a disaster for the teenager and for his/her family, when the parents don’t take care of their children and give them a lot of time for do other things, also when their parents are not strict with them, the problems or the consequences are going to be worse. Some of them are consuming drugs and being a member of a group of gain.
The cause is the bad influence of friends. This can bring to the teenager, who has less self-esteem or feel depress; consequently, the teenager stars to become a kind of boy who is depress, wants to go to parties, and things related to this. Moreover they don’t obey their parents, they hurt the feelings of their parents, and they might arrive late to h their home, and so on.
This cause have a big impact in the life of teenagers, but not in all of them, as I said, it can be in some teenagers who are depress or have less self-esteem.
The effects are too alarm, because some of them can drink alcohol, they can consume drugs, so both alcohol and drug can kill the teenager, in their feelings, their bodies, and they can lose the way of seeing the life. For instance, the 56% of teenagers who consume drugs of depression, which are alcohol, marihuana, terokal, medicaments; kill them in part on account of the fact that at first they feel great, but the next day they are near to suicide in bridges or consuming poison fir rats, and so on.
Not only can they consume drugs and drink alcohol, but also they can be inside of a gain, the gain is a group of teenagers, which are in the age of 13 to 22. They produce Identity, social exclusion, and a big problem in the society. Furthermore, the teenagers who consume alcohol and drugs, depend on them because they don’t have a sense of life, or their parents leave them, because they have to work.
In conclusion, the causes of drug addiction are a lot, but the most unbelievable thing are the effects, because they change the way of living of the teenagers, and change completely their behavior, so you have to be careful with the people you related with at school or any place!
The cause is the bad influence of friends. This can bring to the teenager, who has less self-esteem or feel depress; consequently, the teenager stars to become a kind of boy who is depress, wants to go to parties, and things related to this. Moreover they don’t obey their parents, they hurt the feelings of their parents, and they might arrive late to h their home, and so on.
This cause have a big impact in the life of teenagers, but not in all of them, as I said, it can be in some teenagers who are depress or have less self-esteem.
The effects are too alarm, because some of them can drink alcohol, they can consume drugs, so both alcohol and drug can kill the teenager, in their feelings, their bodies, and they can lose the way of seeing the life. For instance, the 56% of teenagers who consume drugs of depression, which are alcohol, marihuana, terokal, medicaments; kill them in part on account of the fact that at first they feel great, but the next day they are near to suicide in bridges or consuming poison fir rats, and so on.
Not only can they consume drugs and drink alcohol, but also they can be inside of a gain, the gain is a group of teenagers, which are in the age of 13 to 22. They produce Identity, social exclusion, and a big problem in the society. Furthermore, the teenagers who consume alcohol and drugs, depend on them because they don’t have a sense of life, or their parents leave them, because they have to work.
In conclusion, the causes of drug addiction are a lot, but the most unbelievable thing are the effects, because they change the way of living of the teenagers, and change completely their behavior, so you have to be careful with the people you related with at school or any place!
It's an interesting essay, but you can add more supporting details, because you have to improve and make your essay as well as the other ones
ResponderEliminarI think it was interesting since you gave some details.I agree with you on some of the causes and some of the effects. I think that drug addiction is a serious issue that is increasing little by little.
ResponderEliminarHello Renzo
ResponderEliminarI think it was interesting since you gave some details.I agree with you on some of the causes and some of the effects. I think you are nice.
Hello, Renzo,
ResponderEliminarI think your essay is interesting and make you recognize what is good and what things are bad, and I also think this essay makes us reflect about drugs
Hi Renzo,
ResponderEliminarI think your essay about effects and causes of drugs are interesting especially at the point that you write that teenagers who consume drugs can feel depresion and it sometimes can turn into suicide, this is something that is too alarm.
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